October 24th, 2008

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 I am looking for feedback on my novel.
Kalyani, the protagonist, is struggling with a diagnosis of mental disorder . Her brother Harshit who is a psychiatrist, and her husband Vivek would like her to take medicines. She does not think medicines are a solution for what ails her. Her son Adi has helped her avoid being forcibly medicated, in a crisis, but now he is away for a while, and she has returned home in resignation. 

How does Kalyani deal with this situation which is a culmination of what she is, as a person? 

How does she find a way out of the maze that is her mind?

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