September 24th, 2008


The Virgin - feedback appreciated

Akasa looked around the unfamiliar street. He had mentioned a cobbler and a hardware store, and from where she was standing she could certainly see both. But could this really be where he lived? It was a bit risky showing up like this...What if she was in the wrong neighborhood completely? She was a bold girl, but she realized that she had acted impulsively. Even if this were the correct building, how would she know which was his flat? She was about to start walking back to the main road where she could find a taxi, but the cobbler waved her over. Suddenly scared, she began to walk faster. He called out, "Are you looking for Arjun?" She stopped and turning to the cobbler hesitantly responded yes.  "Third floor. On the right."

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