This is a scene right after the opening of the novel. I am looking for critical evaluation/feedback
Preeti, the protagonist is a woman who has been pressurised to take medication for suspected bipolar disorder.
The other people are- Adi- her son, who is taking care of her in Bangalore where she has landed after a violent episode with her husband Vivek who is at work( not in Bangalore). Adi is not going to be in India for a month.
Jay her brother , a psychiatrist practising in UK is trying to convince the family to hospitalise Preeti. She has just got out of the hospital, after experiencing a severe reaction to the medication proposed.
The post on Live journal is on my journal
(I have consolidated them all on the blog- for anyone who wants to check out what happened before this scene)
Sorry for cross posting.